Friday, March 18, 2011

Be Warned

The darkness softly creeping about
Like a whisper it draws you in
Such as day it finds its way
Luring all men with promise of power
Promises laced with poison draw men to temptation, pulling them away from the path
Like a tree the darkness grows
Slowly, Slowly gaining strength
Do not fall down that hidden trap
Do not go down that distant path
Be warned, for darkness lies ahead
Be warned about that promised land
Be true to you and you alone will get to the end of that long path

2 comments:

Danny K. said...

I liked how scary you made this sound. Nice Job.

Unknown said...

I love your writing style kiddo! you write beautifully and with so much detail...you emote well...it makes the reader "feel" more of what he/she is reading...keep up the great work...love you!! your stepmom, Cheryl